The Critic

I’m patient.

I try to be.

I’m patient with everyone else

just not me.

The clothes don’t fit,

hanging in my wardrobe.

You used to be fit –

where did it go?

When did you give up

on yourself?

Why does everyone else

get all your love

and all your care?

Yet you save your criticism

just for you.

A daily gift

of guilt and shame.

It’s tiring.

I’ll try harder

tomorrow.

© Sharon O’Neil. All rights reserved. Original work protected by copyright law


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2 responses to “The Critic”

  1. Those changes we don’t want to admit – very creative and well written!

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